Mystery Green Revision

The revision I need for my paper about observing the ice rink are a couple of things. First off, I probably have to check grammar and spelling errors. In rough drafts I usually have a couple of those throughout the paper. Also, I need to put some more information in, so it will be more supportive and the paper will be a little longer. Other then those little problems I feel that the paper is up to the standards of the assignment.